oh angel,
have you come to save me?
but angel do you not know,
that it might be too late,
on part of thee.
but no worry, now that you have come,
u can have all that is left,
i would give to anyone for free.
cant promise any fruit though,
for there was never really a tree.
i offer you my soul,
but i sold its better half to the satan,
so don't be disappointed
cuz i doubt if its whole.
i offer you my body,
losing it has been a long desire,
it is strong, for it has endured,
and maybe less painful will be the final fire.
i offer you my heart,
but again i cant give you all,
lets settle for half,
for i want to feel it broken apart.
i offer you love,
something i have in plenty,
so here it is angel dearest,
take it all, i need it no more,
for i am unable to find anyone more worthy.
Thursday, May 31, 2007
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5 comments:
jaws dropping...
'how cud he write this?!!' srprsd look...
open thesaurus to search for appropiate compliment words...
jwas dropping again..
sexc!!!!
i think im running out of adjectives to express....excellent work!!!!!
maza nahi aaya utna...baad me dobara padhunga....
this's like.. too gud man!! cud relate to it.. the meaning ov it needs a new jargon ov words to b applauded!!way to go.. :)
nice!!but i dont understand is how a BODY endures something, isnt it the soul-or the heart-or the 'I' that endures-the body...is just the operating system...???
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