Thursday, May 31, 2007

only thing worth it...

oh angel,
have you come to save me?
but angel do you not know,
that it might be too late,
on part of thee.

but no worry, now that you have come,
u can have all that is left,
i would give to anyone for free.
cant promise any fruit though,
for there was never really a tree.

i offer you my soul,
but i sold its better half to the satan,
so don't be disappointed
cuz i doubt if its whole.

i offer you my body,
losing it has been a long desire,
it is strong, for it has endured,
and maybe less painful will be the final fire.

i offer you my heart,
but again i cant give you all,
lets settle for half,
for i want to feel it broken apart.

i offer you love,
something i have in plenty,
so here it is angel dearest,
take it all, i need it no more,
for i am unable to find anyone more worthy.

5 comments:

pourush said...

jaws dropping...
'how cud he write this?!!' srprsd look...
open thesaurus to search for appropiate compliment words...
jwas dropping again..

sexc!!!!

Unknown said...

i think im running out of adjectives to express....excellent work!!!!!

Unknown said...

maza nahi aaya utna...baad me dobara padhunga....

Rajni said...

this's like.. too gud man!! cud relate to it.. the meaning ov it needs a new jargon ov words to b applauded!!way to go.. :)

Lavanya Venkataraman said...

nice!!but i dont understand is how a BODY endures something, isnt it the soul-or the heart-or the 'I' that endures-the body...is just the operating system...???